All Comments on 'Pam's Present'

or is it me, this story could be UNISEXUAL as Chris could be Male or Female. Did I miss somthing by not being able to read between the lines. TK U MLJ LV NV

Such a beautiful story of friendship and intimacy! I loved the ambiguity of Chris's gender. The trust and playfulness between the two was so appealing whether Chris was male or female; that bit of info seemed enticingly irrelevant to me. What a lovely present! :)

I just deleted a comment. It was not at all inappropriate and helpfully pointed out a significant problem in the writing. I've fixed it though, and I don't want dwelling on that problem to detract from other readers' experience of the story.

Thanks again, anonymous commentator. Although I deleted your comment, I still want to acknowledge it.

-- hb