All Comments on 'Pandemic'

In my book a pretty good story. I'll be checking your other stories.

As for the 3 comments before me, what I see is a bit .of nitpicking. The story is a work of fiction as told by the author. So I would say Kimoto Dragons could be from anywhere, and unrealistic, I think maybe could fall in to the same class as fiction.

Carry on Alpha Drive. Thank you.

Glad you are back writing again!

Keep going

Part 2,3 ect...More like this.

Keep going on your other stories as well

Excellent Story! Please continue!

Finish this! While you’re at it, finish The Resort too!

Why does it repeat? Makes no sense.

And it really should continue to some natural end of Jessa and Jim

This is PHENOMENAL. PLEASE continue this story!!!!!!

Us readers hope that you are working on a new chapter. I agree with NVDiceGuy, Why does it repeat? Makes no sense. At first I thought it might an alternate version, but nope, it was the same.

"He quietly whispered outload". Then there's "dame" and "dam" when you wanted "damn". There were many other errors, including, as others have said, you pasting the story twice within itself. This could have been hot, but it was a mess, too disjointed to enjoy.

It seems the last half is a repeat?