All Comments on 'Pandemic Pt. 01 Ch. 01-05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very nice story!

Very nice story,thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A very good beginning!

Loved it! A few errors don't detract from a well written and nicely flowing story.

SnigelsmedSnigelsmedover 6 years ago
Thumbs up!

When Tiffany ambushed Annalise when her (Ana's) guard was down, I wasn't suprised. They all (maybe not the MC) had already shown some lack off sence and caution. Great work!

Can't stay. Gotta go to the next one!

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