All Comments on 'Pandora's Panties'

by legerdemer

Sort by:
  • 18 Comments
AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well done! Great twist on a well used story and great ending, too. Really hot, and also well written and emotional.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story

Very erotic and a different slant on a familiar theme. Thank you

legerdemerlegerdemerover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you, folks, for reading my story. I come back now and then and I’m tickled pink (well, maybe black) at the comments I find.

~~Mer

Fereniki_AlexandrouFereniki_Alexandroualmost 6 years ago
Absolutely spectacular!

An extraordinarily hot story. Well-written and deeply arousing. I came so hard. I have no complaints. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
a.m.a.z.i.n.g!!!!!!

A realy great, well written story.

made me squirt on my office chair. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow!

Every detail was amazing! Thank you for sharing your gift and making me as wet as Amy herself.

lorencinolorencinoabout 7 years ago
Brava!

Scrivi benissimo!

Your writing is superb. It was easy to suspend my beliefs and flow with the Voodoo element so that I experienced the swirl of hot arousal in the extremely sensuous and satisfying world you create in this story.

You deserve to have one this competition.

topoffagaintopoffagainover 7 years ago
Loved this!

Part II maybe? The self-healing voodoo panties! Made me hot!!!

ErisJadeErisJadealmost 8 years ago
Absolutely fantastic!!!

What more can I say? Love the premise and adore the beautiful, flowing writing. Clear, well-crafted characters. Loved it. Brava!!!

~EJ~

LBLR15LBLR15about 8 years ago
Loved the New Orleans setting

Great story and very unique. I wonder if Mel will continue to long for the panties even with such a short exposure. Characters are wonderful and HOT. I think 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Well worth the read

Super story, love the masturbation scenes .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fucking Panties

Unusual story. I can imagine these panties providing uninhibited delights to the owners eager wet cunt. It would be a real test of willpower to get rid of them. Well written and interesting for non vodoo people. Please let us have more.

UrjUrjover 8 years ago

Great story. I would have preferred a loose end with regards to Livvie's and Mel's fate with the panties being intact and Mel's curse unlifted.

bookworm96bookworm96over 8 years ago
Amazing

Truly amazing and erotic !

💜💜💜

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Kinda rushed ending, but still great, 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW!

More! More! More!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 8 years ago
Interesting voodoo

Even without the voodoo, I think Jack and Amy would have gotten together, but the voodoo made the plot even better.

Great story. Good luck in the Halloween contest.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous