by KiasCaps
Another amusingly hot and horny look at our school system. Makes me wish I were back in school if it is anything like this. You have an incredible imagination which I suppose some might find deeply disturbing although I am not one of them. You manage to keep things wildly sexy while still allowing some emotion and quite a bit of comedy come through and I couldn’t ask for more than that unless it was to request more chapters as they seem to get more interesting and slightly more warped which is right up my alley. Excellent job again.
J.D.
The story is fucking awesome dude, usually I love this kind of genres of stories transformation of succubus is a real turn on for me 😅keep writing this story and keep it coming, waiting for part 4 and love ur stories so far 👍💯
Love transformation and corruption. Nice change on succubus story being light hearted, no enemies to fight and well written. Since you said you wasn't sure what to do with Pham, suppose she could have been slowly tempted and corrupted into wanting to be a succubus sub. Perhaps Mako makes a succubus town. Thanks
Love the story and the way it is written. I hope there is more in store for Mako and Cain as their relationship and understanding of each other grows.