All Comments on 'Panic at the Palace'

This story begs for a sequel.

5/5

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Why do victims of blackmail never learn to just get the proper authorities on the case

This was good and hopefully there will be more.

Love this story so far. Great writing and an intriguing plot has left me wanting for more. Can’t wait for the next part!

Woah. This was really good. Hopefully we get to read the rest of it!!!

A princess will have a body guard, preventing random contact with the public. You jump between tenses, which distracts from the quality of the story.

Ignoring all the above, this is a good story with a good build-up of tension.

I agree that the change from past to present tense is jarring. But the story - such as it is so far - is sizzling and erotic. More please!