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Click here"Victoria, I'm coming. Fuck-"
I tried to stifle my scream by biting hard into her shoulder as she fucked me through the waves of pleasure. She eventually began to slow, when she knew it had become too intense for me. Opening my eyes finally, I attempted to reach down and pull her out of me, feeling deliciously sensitive suddenly, but as usual, her hand remained there stubbornly, and I let it. Panting, and clinging to her for support, my body froze as I noticed a movement across the other side of the room. The door, which I was sure had been closed, was suddenly slightly ajar. I narrowed my eyes, staring into the hallway, and I was sure for a second that I saw the bottom of a long trench coat, flashing out of view, as it disappeared into the darkness.
- COMMENTS
Only_connectalmost 2 years agoI agree that the change from past to present tense is jarring. But the story - such as it is so far - is sizzling and erotic. More please!
Erilogicaalmost 2 years agoA princess will have a body guard, preventing random contact with the public. You jump between tenses, which distracts from the quality of the story.
Ignoring all the above, this is a good story with a good build-up of tension.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoLove this story so far. Great writing and an intriguing plot has left me wanting for more. Can’t wait for the next part!
