All Comments on 'Panic in Aisle Five'

Yes it had lots of minor blips like calling Jordan “She”, etc. but a damn good story anyway 👌. An easy 5* from me.

Very romantic romance ;-)

I enjoy a story that comes full circle - Jordan's trip to Green Bay was a sweet touch. Five stars.

Good stuff...as usual. 5.0*

Excellent story!

Well done. Great characters whom I’d like to see again. 5*

Great story! I had a loving mom (stepmom) so it hit home.

Still needs an epilogue to tie it up, to finish the HEA.

5 stars!

"Good story from the Valentine State"

Really nice story!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

DAMN fine story!

5-stars, of course

You have pronoun problems

Classic Romance

I gave this story a five, not because it was so perfect, but because it was so true to life and I could relate to the characters. Life throws most real people some ugly curves. We are not defined by our mistakes, but how we bounce back learning the lessons needed and moving forward.

The Hoary Cleric

Happiness doesn't fall into your lap ... it sometimes needs to be fought for again and again.

Nice story…even if they are Packers fans.

I was excited to see a new story from this author. It was both interesting and different…and well written as usual (with a few minor errors). Thanks!

Five easy stars. Excellent work, Peyton!

Nice story. I get that you didn’t have an editor, but it was probably a half Literotica page longer than it needed to be. Still, a great piece of work, overall.

We can guess the rest but an epilogue would have been nice. But still a cracking story. Well done and thanks.

Please write another chapter. Jaylen will have a real mommy, that loves him, and she may be carrying his brother or sister. If you don't think he's her baby, try hurting him, or her husband, Jaylen's daddy!

Good story, although I’m not entirely sure why you are using colour denominations for some characters and not others? That minor issue aside, I enjoyed the story, both people tentative and bruised from previous relationships makes for a good combination, place an innocent child and an abusive mother in the mix and it’s a winner. I was surprised that you didn’t use a line about her being prepared to fight to protect Jaylen at the end there, very much in the Momma Bear mould, nothing quite as attractive to a Dad as a potential Stepmother willing to go to war to protect her Man’s child. Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Great story!

5

Beautiful ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️