All Comments on 'Panopticon'

A perfect short story. The ending is excellent, didn't see it coming, and it ties it all together. Loved this. Hope you keep writing.

I've been reading here for many years and never once commented, but I also never expected to see literary brilliance on literotica. That's not exactly what we're here for, but damn if this isn't genius writing with excellent use of repetition. Your style here reminds me of the best parts of Palahniuk or Ellis, but crazy sexy in a way they fail to deliver for girls like me. Incredible work.