All Comments on 'Paradise Bound Ch. 04'

Another winner!

Really good chapter, not the end I hope! Thank you.

I read the second half with the thought that Derrick was going to die on his mission (which would explain his absence from her current life), but this doesn't feel like a final chapter at all.

I couldnt stop reading it was great i hope its not the end she should find out shes pregnant while hes gone but if u write more im sure it be great,You are a good writer thank u for a great story i love he alway wanted her maked it Hot and it was loving also .Hope other chapter come soon

I've loved every chapter so far and please continue..

Please continue...