All Comments on 'Paradise Island Ch. 02'

As per Ch. 02: , last sentence,is she ?

I never thought of the comparison. Interesting connection. New story should go up tomorrow, It's sent in already. I do see the connection, and loved the movie. The island I'm more thinking of is Gilligan's Island, More what I picture when I see it, just without the slapstick comedy, volcano, head hunters, and lack of modern conveniences. Brook shields would have been perfect as Susie if she had been a red head, Maybe Kirsten Dunst.

I know I could use a proof-reader at times.. Really use one. But it is what it is, When I get it complete if there is more interests in my stories I will proof it better and have someone else to it too. The next couple chapters of this story will be interesting, more sex and different. Keep the comments up and I will continue to post more. I have and idea for a couple of

its a clever storyline, and Susie and Sam are fun characters. i gave it 5 stars - but - as you know - you do need someone to proof and edit these stories. sometimes the poor grammar and typos take away from from whats a very good story. I'm looking forward to chapter 3......and hopefully more

Great read. More please

Would have been nice if Sam had eaten his pretty ginger haired Sister Susie after he had Lovingly carefully and full of love had caressed and shaved her ginger haired pussy bald and smooth! I would have loved to see him gently and affectionately shave her cunt hair and have their Mom walk in and catch them and approve her kids affection though sexual!

May be Dad can repeat the performance for MOM after Susie shows hers off to the family! May be in chapter 3

They all are rich now!