All Comments on 'Paradise Isle, Slave Trade Pt. 04'

I am thoroughly enjoying your story. It's nicely erotic but what I enjoy most is the normality of the portrayal of the situation, for a fantasy story that is. As in nobody is a mad sadist or whatever and the protagonist doesn't fall to bits or take leave of her senses every time she gets touched. Her reactions are portrayed in a realistic and believable way. Great stuff and I'm looking forward to more.

J'apprécie également votre histoire, mais vous ne développez pas assez l'utilisation des décorations de Michelle. Piercing. Elle en a beaucoup. Ça pourrait ? Comme Adèle dans une autre histoire. Ça doit être difficile. Continuez bien . Merci

5 Stars of pure sexual entertainment and well written characters that are having fun and playtime. Great story so well written and developed. Keep up the adventures. Cheers

Wonderful story! I hope there will be a bit more bdsm content, maybe ballet boots, she working as a latex maid, a more strict regime and a dungeon set up in the house. So michelle will feel more like a true submissive slave, also her body must feel like sexual entity just for the use of others envisaging her piercings and other bodymods.