All Comments on 'Paranormal Research Club Ch. 04'

This is a wonderful story!!! Well thought out and developed. Keep writing and ill keep reading!

Its very nice to see that this story is not abandon, its not offten when i find a story with a real storyline to it.

For not abandoning this story. It's got plot, great characters, well written,and hot sex. It's crushing when authors leave their creations unfinished. I'm looking forward to the next part.

yay yay yay! thanks for continuing the story!

This was so amazing... Please make chapter 5, and 6, an 7... 8 9 10 11 12 all the way to 99 ;)

Please don't make us wait another 4 months for the next chapter!

Just found your story by accident. Please bless us with more of this story.

I enjoy being able to find the references to the mythical gods that you mention - give a better feel to the story, thanks for writing - however I could not find any reference to the Fist of Hahgwehdaetgah Any suggestion

Thank you for your interest in the story! I like mixing actual mythology with my own stories because I feel that it makes my writing seem more believable. Like the Necklace of Tlazolteotl, the Fist of Hahgwehdaetgah (which you will find described in greater detail in future chapters) is an item that I invented for this story. Hahgwehdaetgah is an evil spirit from Iroquois mythology, and you should be able to find out more about him online.

I don't have much more to go on chapter 7, although I have no idea how I'll find time to work on it. I have a few more details to work out before I can finish it. :-)

This is an interesting story unlike anything I have read in a long time. For some reason, I mentally disconnect from the story but have not figured out why. I like analysing storylines and characters but sometie hit blank spots. I have rated the first four chapters a 5 but not really sure why.