All Comments on 'Parasite'

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Go2daWestGo2daWestover 3 years ago

I'm always a fan of "what are the children like" in these sorts of stories. Thank you for scratching that itch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not bad for an extra long one shot.

Plain and simple, I enjoyed this one shot. Lots of growth and stuff.

I got a bit worried the Pregancy cause like, was it the worm changing into something else or even an alien baby?

But it turned out great. I'm kinda interested in a part two. Like maybe the worm manages to find a poor futa girl in a stray village and the growth gets her the "goddess treament"

Just a silly idea if you are ever interested in persuing a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Bonnie is ultra freaky and that's okay!

This one-shot was superb as well as super hot with the multitude of descriptions of Bonnie's freaky mutant body; The stuff with her falling in and out of consciousness in shock at her growing each time was especially fun. I'm usually not a fan of multi cocks or dicknipples (evidently Bonnie isn't either, at first) but I find that they were appropriate for the story; The sizes, in particular, are definitely to my liking as they aren't too crazy, anything past effectively immobile into building sized isn't really my cup of tea so it's just right.

The romantic/domestic portions of the story with Bonnie and Matilda just hanging out were some of my favorites; Love how that yearning was always there, and Bonnie getting pretty freaky kinda forced the issue. It was much sweeter and heartfelt than I initially expected! Aside from all the excessiveness they seem to be a perfectly happy family; Which is really nice as I was expecting something dark to happen like the title kinda suggests. "Parasite" doesn't give you the most pleasant visual right? So it's nice to see a pretty sweet ending considering!

I'd certainly love to see some kind of continuation for this! I'm kind of a sap and want to see another futa x futa romance but maybe from a different angle? Perhaps they can both be present for the transformation or be reunited childhood friends or something like that. The transformed futa hates her freaky body but her friend can support her emotionally as well as physically? I dunno!

I really loved the one-shot and can't wait to read more of your works in the future! Especially if they have romantic hyper futa stuff like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This is perfect story!

parasite+ hyper+dicknipples+extra penises and balls+hyper futanari offsprings

Every source was my favorite! I love this!

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 3 years ago
Totally Gross.

But entertaining.To have Bonnie be invaded by an alien parasite,and turned into a multi-cocked monstrocity with 25 feet dicks and 6 sets of beach ball sized nuts and cums gallons at a time is just outrageous,and to top it off Bonnie gave birth to twin girls after 15 months,and both Rachel and Nicole were like Mom Bonnie with big cocks and balls.

But atleast Bonnie and Matilda,and Nicole and Rachel made their sexlives work for them.So I am happy they got lots of cum from each other.Finally I wish the parasite had just died or something so it couldn't do this to anyone else,but oh well still worth the read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fun as this was. I hope the next story be less futa, not fan of futa. Can the next story be like this but breast expansion?

RazorDjinRazorDjinabout 2 years ago

What the fuck did I just read 😐 the only reason I kept reading up to and after the doctor said no hope, is I wanted to see how you fix it and what that thing even wanted and guess to kill it

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