by MissLisaJones
This is another home run. Creative and sexy.
You have done well, you built it up and then released :)
Wow... Can't wait for Chapter 2...
OH dear, The mental imagery is wreaking havoc on my composure LoL. ** I LIKE **
Good story. Good writing. I want to see where this goes. Clearly this isn't set in America. I guessing the Uk?