by Clivelive101
EXCELLENT.
Congratulations on a brilliant story, well prepared, crafted and written, easy reading even when the American idioms appeared.
A very interesting trip down the incest rabbit hole. My only improvement would be instead of the guys taking pictures of the ladies oozing cum ... Have the guys setting up their camera phones for a group picture each standing next to the woman who is showing their lovers juices.
This would have some interesting spinoffs between the parents, their own kids and more. More please!
I liked it but what was the point in introducing the other family? It kinda hurt the premise of family love if there are already future partners in the picture.