by bigthrow
i've been lurking on this site for 10 years and yours is one of the best stories ive ever read here please continue to write... doesn't have to be this, just don't let your talent not be seen cause you have it
WOW!
Seriously wow. Easily one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I love the way you write. Please please please continue this story!
I clearly am missing some pertinent details, like what's homies power and how does it work? But this was well written. If only the game made sense.
I am so impressed with the level of storytelling here! Evan/Beat would make an amazing character in a show or movie!