All Comments on 'Part time nympho'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good tale - but

I enjoyed your story - very good first.

But, please learn the proper usage of laid/lay and laying/lying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
pls ... continue, slightly more realiatic, cumwise ... probably?

pls ... continue, slightly more realiatic, cumwise ... probably?

she's got the hormonnal disorder .. not him ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
BS

I was okay with it up to the 35cm (14") dick and then it went into the "SciFi'" cat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great job, can we get another chapter?

Don’t worry about all these other people in the comments criticizing the proportions of shit. I thought it was great! Pretty neat plot, I liked that they can be happy together. I totally get it, if this is the end of the story. It would be great to get another chapter though. :)

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