All Comments on 'Party Favor'

You the shit..ter

load of shit I've ever read. Even to invent it as fiction shows a very disturbed mind.

Don't write until you've sought help.

Go away (permanently) you pathetic piece of dog shit.

pure evil,

These men could and should spend YEARS in the slammer.. No doubt about it!!!

I'm trying to think of a story of lower quality than this crap. Hmmm . . .nope, nothing comes to mind. Just curious, are you older than 13?

That was awful!

Did someone get hurt' Someone die? Was she unwilling?

All you fucking prudes need to move off the site (permanently).

Start your own fucking site dickheads. 5*

Changing views was annoying. This is in the wrong category. Not a great story but not horrible either. Good stroke story for some, but I guarantee it won't be anyone from the LW crowd.

does not work well.

in bdsm. Although LW has some of the most brutal sm stories I've ever read. It works for what it is. You can spell, punctuate and write a coherent sentence. Descriptions were good also.

You need to work on paragraphing though..huge blocks of gray onscreen discourages readers. Take care -- and keep on keepin on...It takes a lot of courage to put your work out here for public consumption. I admire that.

Should be BDSM. For me, the husband comes across as mean, dumb (risk of STDs and psychological damage to wife), and perverted. Nothing erotic here.

your previous series titled Teasing Her from 06. I failed to check your story page before commenting previously on Party Favor. Teasing Her looks promising for this reader. Take care...

Not particularly my cup of tea,I find humiliation play to be non erotic.My only prob with the story (yes,folks,IRL this would be a no no,health issues and also hsving a.kid from the office involved,but this is a story) is that as a bd/sm story it lacks the bacground for bdsm,in that the story makes it feel like he has the right to do this to her and she can't say no.....from the way it is written it makes bdsm appear to condone gang rape....I think it would work better if at.the end H checked in with her and made sure she was okay....as is seems bit cold...also,as part of the writing,to indicate this is consensual she could struggle between wanting to do this and thoughts of stopping this via using a safeword,for me that would mske it more loving bdsm.

For those saying it is filth,etc,why did you read it,the description says what it is.If you don't like this don't read it.It may not float your boat which is fine,some people.don't get off on once a week sex with.the lights off. If you want to see the difference,there is an article in Today's NY Times about a 26 year old wife who had been drugged and sexually assaulted by her husband and some other men who were part of some fundy group in KC,MI...done by 'good christians' all...this went on for months then allegedly the hubby had her suffocated to death in fear she told her therapist what had happened....that is sick, it wasn't.a story.

To give this piece of crap 5* shows the kind of mentally you have. You're a loser, get some help as soon as possible. You have no idea what good erotica is all about. 1* for this piece of shit, too bad a lower score isn't possible.

Drop this ridiculous first-person, present-tense, you-are-there format. It's pretentious and it does not work. Can you think of a single good story or book that has been written this way, ever? Who is the narrator supposed to be talking to? Certainly not to the reader. What's the point?

He humiliates her and has trained her to accept whatever he does (or gets others to do) as Ok. They risk STD's and pain for hours of strange relations. They are both sad.

What's the point?

must be the dope i hope his father's underwear is safe

Superbly written and very erotic. I felt myself in thecroom with her. Oh so hot. More like this please.

As this story goes, it's very well told and very erotic. As to the people who don't understand "what's the point?".... that is simple. This isn't bible class. This isn't marriage counselling 101. I know you people think it should only be a husband and his wife, missionary style, lasting 5 minutes without the woman enjoying it because sex is only meant for procreation. Maybe some would ask you "what's the point?"

5 stars.

is the love in this relationship?????????????????????????

This was a well written story, sensual if your into sluts and control.

I love reading comments about how people are so outraged over what they deem as sick, or demented however else they feel the story is bad. Remember people we are on a porn story site. One guy might find it hot that a guy cuts off his girls finger and uses the blood from her stump as lube as he finger fucks her with it. Another guy might think its gross. Who cares? It's porn and it freedom to express it anyway you want. It's funny how people get so judgmental and angry over some porn fiction.

My husband and two of his friends were watching the first of several football games on TV when I returned with at least a dozen bags of groceries. I got no help from my husband or his buddies. But the man next door stopped working in his yard to help me take my purchases inside. I took chips, cheese and beers to them before returning to the kitchen. After putting away the groceries, I loaded the washing machine. Our neighbor continued to help me. When I turned around he picked me up and set me on top of the washer. Within seconds he had my shorts and thong on the floor and began to fuck me silly. It only happened that one time but I will never forget it. Ever.

Truly Outstanding Cum Party, Ending In A Great Ass Climax! Thanx!

This is one nasty story.

I would literally call this criminal.

Good story for BDSM category. Or non consent at a push