All Comments on 'Party Favor Pt. 01'

I thought the way you paid attention to detail was very convincing. I am looking forward to the next chapter! Five⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I liked the way you described her circumstances and built up her desperation to the point where she was basically putty in Angela's hands. It flowed nicely leading up the sex between her and Olivia. Keep it up.

Very sexy, well written story! I look forward to reading the next part!

a lot more and then even more i like how it all flowed with all the build up to her reorientation and her succumbing to her lesbian side i hope she have a few more sessions with Angela and also Olivia to really bring out her lesbian side

Such a good read that's been written so very well. Great back story already told and now???

I thought your story was wonderfully written. Your writing quality is so high that I think you would be able to publish in various main stream media outlets. I liked your story also because it gave me a bit of an insight into how the agencies work, including their non-disclosure agreements, etc. But it did not lead me to erotic arousal or masturbation, the main reason I read literotica.com stories. I did like the fact that Angela liked to have her asshole licked - one of my own fetishes. I would have liked Angela to reciprocate and lick the narrator's cunt and asshole. It is implied that Olivia is going to do that, but I would have liked to have that 'scene' included here as well. Nice, believable build up.

She turned rather fast so I don't think she was straight at all. Not conflicted enough so she comes off as a lesbian that was in denial or charitably a very repressed bisexual. The scene was very hot though. You did better than many "straight" girls turning lesbian but I was hoping it would be a bit more realistic considering your other work.

Great to hear you all have enjoyed it. Chapter 2 and 3 are both done for this and I will be submitting 2 soon. Since the last anonymous brought it up, I hope it’s obvious on reread that she isn’t straight, but very repressed and in denial about her sexuality, and this job was just the catalyst given her mental state to push her over the edge. You’ll see more of her struggles with her orientation in the next couple chapters!

Very well done! I cannot wait for more of this story! Thank you!

wonderful story and storytelling.

Another great story, looking forward to part2..

I loved it. Nicely paced. Leaving her so aroused was a good touch. Lesser writers would have let the secretary finish her.

Thanks.

oh no... i hope angela was old ugly butch.... no...