All Comments on 'Party Mom Ch. 05'

I'm glad it's still going on.

As for requests, I guess I'd like to see the mom in more high school scenarios, parties, maybe after school things, with more boys like her son. Sonny's great, too, as an instigator.

yeah, can you go back to how the first 3 stories were, everything is confusing in a way, i love your stories, because it feels like something like the first party mom could happen, and i find that hot, like maybe you can make two alternate universes? like after this one, go back and make a true party mom 4, one that leads to the new party at the end of ch.3 please, now for any ideas, i like what the commentor below me said, it feels empty now and i wish it was back to the orginal form, maybe you can go back to that, in a new story series? one with every thing starts off way to normal with the mom and son, but just keeps getting worse and worse, like i wish things would go back to how the other chapters were written, scifi likeness doesnt fit well with this type of story, you cant just go into it like this, please stick to the same versions as ch.1-3, i love when the mom is free, and fucks boys her son's age and has no clue about it, and after all this story is called, "party mom" where did the party go? i miss chad's reaction's to seeing the mom do something disturbing with guys his own friends, a school idea would be hot and easy to write and easy to follow to, after all it is said that the mom voulnteers at the school snack booth, look we as fans just miss what you have forgotton about in your work, i love your stories!!!! but i just miss reading about a big chested mom, so dumb, and she just fucks every wheres, like take more advantage that chad is connected to her, so he gets blasted with cum, or she swings her arm and he flys on the cock she was about to suck, idk it is your story, just give us fans another party mom ch1 like story again, wow that was a GEM, that is clearly the best, hottest, well written, story on this website, and it felt like that could happen, cause think about it, do you know how awckward it is when you and your friend are together, and him and a girl start making out and you just wait all bored and lonely, well thatd 100x more awkward when its your mom, the idea turns us on

I guess I fall into the other posters who want you to go back to your roots like the first few chapters of "Party Mom". These last few entries have just gotten harder to believe(I know it's all fantasy but still) and thus the hotness has gone done a few notches. The best parts of your other entries were when Josh watched his Mom get abused by guys his own age. It was a real turn on knowing Josh was watching his Mom get taken advantage of and loving it. As I said above, I know this is all fantasy but the more "realistic" the situations could be the hotter the stories.

I love the idea of you starting a similar series with the Son maybe spying on his Mom getting picked up or her sneaking off with boys her sons own age. Being reluctant at first but being coerced into the sex. Check out "Katie's Craving" by thehumpman or anything by sa222(which I'm sure you have already).

You are a fantastic writer and please keep up the stories as you have a great following.

Sorry I mixed up Chad and Josh.

Among your stories I liked My Friends and My Milf Mom the most compared to Party Mom, which is liked by others.

You seem to lost your edge, if you even checked the comments of "My Friends and My Milf Mom" and pick up the idea it would have been a great read. Alas!!

This "sex resort" stuff is really confusing and boring. I liked the earlier stories for the Chad/Sonny stuff, and now they're not even in scenes together. Since this story opens with Sonny taking a small dick, I'd hope a Chad/Sonny sex scene could be on its way, but pretty much anything would be better than the last two chapters.

how about what happens next, sonny meets back with the mom and chad, maybe after awhile, skip back to them going home, and say a few months past, and the mom is now pregnant, with huge boobs, way bigger then before, and they are full of milk, but she hasnt had the baby yet, so her shirts look all ripped and streched, and she can pull out her boob, and chad can watch sonny suck and milk the mom, and sonny can get milk on her lip, like a milk moustache, the mom can be a milky milf. how about going back to the realistic form, but continuing off after this chapter. but the mom still is very slutty. maybe the bad guys, force the mom to almost have sex with chad, and chad is squirming around, not wanting that to happen, but the mom is pulling his pants down, and when she gets to his dick, she sees how small it is, and laughs at her own son, but acts all cutely/motherly, while making fun of his penis size. The bad guy should make chad suck cock, and maybe when the mom is jerking someone off, cum flys at chad. Please dont abanndon this story, just try to fix the story a little. you said, that us commenters can help with the next chapter. im trying to think of good possibilites, to figure out, how to manage the direction of the story. Just one opinion, is, for future stories, try not to make the direction of the story so complicated. I always look forward in your work.

Just giving thoughts, about future chapters.

I think this is all pretty interesting stuff, but it's turned into a big production! I don't think many people care so much about an intricate plot. I know I don't. The very first chapter was by far the hottest, most believable and simplest one yet. I've gotten this far though, so the idea itself is gold! The humiliated son, forced to watch his slut mom. God, so hot.

Love it, can you please finish the story?

Yet another story promoting the betrayal of a mother to her son and also about making it to where the son can't do nothing about it in hense forth making him a coward who don't stand up for himself or his mother so he betrayed his mother as well it is stories like this that makes people think it is ok to betray the ones that love them you and the other writers of stories like this makes me sick

This was like watching a car wreck. You want to turn away but can't. Humiliation has to be experienced by someone with something to loose. Chad never had anything to loose, so he just blunders along with no sense of self. The only time he actually had a personality was when he lamented that the money from the porno was gone.

Reading this made me depressed and feeling like there is no hope in the world. It takes a real talent to cause a reaction like that.

I'm assuming you'll write more chapters, and if so, could you lighten up on poor Chad? At least let him get his little needle dick into someone.

I've spent a major portion of my life as an "accessory" one way or another, and when I finally learned that I could do something about it, despite how difficult it was, I pushed on through into a better life. I still don't get laid, kind of like Chad, but at least I'm not tied by a slave string. By the way, that's an excellent structure you are building with the implied science fantasy equipment.

Keep writing the further adventures of Chad, the world needs to read this.

Please continue to story I can't wait to hear about what happens to Sonny and want to know what secrets the island holds

What a fucked up story, l breezed thru it and it never improved got worse in fact

Scores 1/5 wish l could give it less.

Total meh story. No son-mother interaction (in terms of humiliation). They don't even communicate. It's just dumb.