Party of Five Ch. 21

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"That was huge," Josh sighed.

"You bet," Dawn replied.

They held each other's hands tightly and explored each others' bodies, caressing every inch.

"Thank you," Josh whispered, finally breaking the silence.

"What for?" Dawn asked with a subtle smile.

"For telling me, silly."

"I can help you with Jacquie if you want me to, I know she would understand."

"Yeah, I hope she does, I can't live without any one of you three."

He shut his eyes and pressed his face against her shoulder and drifted off into sleep, thinking about his good luck.

To be continued ...

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Awesome!!

I can’t say I’m a fan of the incest portion of the story but you did an incredible job of how you brought Josh together with each of his sisters was extremely well done and erotic.

Very nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome Story

This series is the best I've read it was very sexy and entertaining and I can't wait for it to continue, Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Really

Granted, this was posted in 2009, buuut....

Dawn is a Hellcat, partying, fucking and sucking her way through every previous chapter. Even after Josh shows her his way, by making love to her, she still spends every chance she gets, in every following episode, pissing in his Cheerios. Dawn has no continuity in this from the previous ch's 1-20. Yes, she had told him, after the two week no sex battle she and Josh had, that his was the only cock she wanted, I still don't see her changing her stripes to become a soft hearted "girl". She is going to keep on fighting and scratching to get what she wants from Josh, what ever that might be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Really love the story

I just hope you come back and finish this great story.

jawolfe91051jawolfe91051over 8 years ago
Great Story

I usually wait until I finish a story before I do comment on it. I gave you 5 stars on all the chapters. I would very much see a continuation of this well written story. People have to realize perfection is great to have but not all people can do it. If they think they can do better, why are they not writing themselves. Keep going with writing as you are doing good and I hope you try to finish this. Thank You!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loved it it's officially my first comment on this site although I am reading stories for over a year I loved this particularly...! hoping u will write more of it!

LOVED IT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Best story ever

Man, I must say this is like the best story every... please continue cause if you don't I'll die... your stories the best I didn't comment on any of the other chapters cause I was waiting for the end, happy writing hope you reveal the next chapter soon. Seriously I'll have a hearth attack if you don't finishing writing ch 22 ohh and I love the josh and Alice part most awesome and the part where she nearly became pregnant was exhilarating you have an art for writing good luck;) please continue ;(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More Olease

I came upon this story late and have really enjoyed it. I would really like it if you would continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more

I really hope this series is continued because this is one of my fav's. I trully enjoyed reading all 21 chapters and looking foward to reading another 21 more if the author choses to write again. Hope he does though cuz I really cant wait.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 12 years ago
This is why outsourcing is vial & just wrong !

This author's heart & apparently libido is in the right place to continue the series. His humor & emotional maturity have quite a ways to go. Vertigo knew when to make Josh the butt of jokes or the instigator. He knew just when to make Dawn a strumpet or unpeel her psyche & show her yearning for real love .

Ink Fox has a ways to go & grow before undertaking this classic's extension. Go with viewing of Monty Python & Seinfeld reruns & then a few actual Liasons , the more dangerous , the better. Three more years is the mínimum . Good luck ( hopefully Vértigo J returns by then) !

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