All Comments on 'Party Replanned'

This is everything I hope for in a mature story--respect, admiration, sensuality, devotion, passion, lust, romance, cerebral banter...thank you! Encore!

Very nice. And thanks for the funny at the end. I laughed right out loud. Great story.

Thank you for writng a story that was fun, loving, erotic and entertaining. I enjoyed the entire story and look forward to a sequel.

Middle age that is. Enjoyed how you wove the quantity of diverse characters into a common group of friends. MSTarot is one of the authors I will read even when the title fails to impress me. Good work and thanks.

Very well told story. Gently woven characters blended incredibly. Age is timeless. Great job.

It just takes them longer. As a friend of mine said, "It now takes my wife and I all night to do once what we once used to do all night."

Great story. Good luck in the Summer Lovin' contest.

Well done!

Sorry I missed this in the contest. Congratulations on your second place win. Thanks for writing.

the comment at the end was surprising and disappointing. There were at least 3 errors that could have been from being tired while typing, but if edited there were likely many more. Fyi sorry I have no account on this website for u to send a reply.

As a 'mature' bod. I did enjoy the pictures you raised of your characters.

Truly a first class job.

Beautiful story, truly a story worth reading. A good blend of passion and tender feelings.

I really liked the story; its slow build, and especially all the unique character developments.Watch your tense, though. I caught several times you switched from past to present. Excellent otherwise. I felt I could really identify with Carl. Thanks, and congratulations.

Beautiful, beautiful story.

.......and sexy.

Thank you for sharing your stories.

Brujay

I enjoyed reading your story and think it is easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing it with us.

respect, admiration, experience and with care.

well done

My wife is 13 years my senior, and I love her very much. My first true lover was my ex girl friends mother, who was 46 when I was 18. So I very much identify with the older woman, younger man stories, and this was a great on.

Don't know if it was intentional, but the poem after 'Nights in White Satin' has the stanza--

Empassioned lovers

Wrestle as one

Lonely man cries for love

And has none

New mother picks up

And suckles her son

Senior citizens

Wish they were young

A nice reference.

Quite simply a beautiful story. Very well crafted, humorous and hot. Thank you.

Oh Christ, I'm one of them old Vietnam guys! How the hell did that happen? Wonderful story, thanks so much for it! Five plus Stars!

I had a somewhat related experience about 35 years ago. I remember her so well. It was one of the best things that ever happened to me, The story brought forth the wonderful feelings that we both felt once we got past age difference. She too, was beautiful and a sweet lover. I wish we could have had a lasting relationship but I was married and her son found out about our liaison... and he didn't like it. We made each other happy for a while.

I appreciate the respect shown in this story. People of all ages deserve respect, even tho' many have learned responses about sex. Religion, more's, past sexual history, mental barriers can all affect peoples ability to share, which is not the same as using someone. Hats off to a feel good story writer!

We who were so very lucky to have an affectionate mature lover recognize this story to be on the side of truth. Wonderful, just wonderful.

a believable and gently told tale of cross generational sexiness

Wonderfully done. Thank you.

Smooth....real smooth! So many possibilities to branch out and weave a little wickedness among the characters, too!!

Another great one.