by Eros_343
Why was there another guy in the story? Felt like the main character only got a pity fuck, and Dave already had used up Rachel and destroyed her.
To bad that Dave didn't have a date so he would not be in the fucking of his sister.
The story would have been more enjoyable.
Nice story but it felt a little abrupt how the story went from her flashing to them making out and then having sex with no build-up.
Cool idea, the sex was hot. Would have liked more exhibitionist scenes to build up the tension. Another chapter would be great.