All Comments on 'Party Store'

Good hard, fast transformation -- very hot!!

The plot line ran smoothly with sufficient back story and the part where he is at his door right when she going to come in very nice.. Excellent overall..

Now that was a sex story!! Thanks for sharing.

until i saw your name i thought it was a guy who wrote this as you are very descriptive from a guys perspective. impressive. I loved your story & your pic. :D i look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you. I have gotten several compliments here and emailed saying they thought I was a guy. That makes me feel good. I have tried to write as a guy before and it didn't get great reviews so it is nice to hear I pulled it off this time.

After reading two of your stories in a row I need a box of tissues and some alone time.

Hotter than Fireball Whiskey!

That was an amazing story really hot and sexy

Loved reading your story. I love the Mom and Son watching an adult video together. Very erotic. Keep up the wonderful work.

Very hot for a quick story. I wish you had mentioned how big the mom's tits were though. I love big titties!

good premise...great sex...thank you.

That was a very hot story. And you call that quick? Perfect length IMHO, and quite a turn on.

5 star. A great short story. Very hot.

tale of love.

That was fantastic. THANK YOU.

Hi, I enjoyed the story, a lot, but I am confused about whether you are a man or a woman. Your Literotica name is female but this story is by a male, at least I think so. The story itself is great. Thank you. Jeanne

That was quite fulfilling. Loved it. Thank you

As they say at the end of batmans t.v. show.Can this be,

THE END ??????????

Well I hope not, good read.

THANKS

That was incredible, amazing story. I had so many orgasms reading that, I will no doubt be back for more

Good job Tiki!

Nice and simple, honest and real. Thank you.

Love you pic too. Keep up the good work.

I loved this story! Good writing and you writing from a man's perspective was great!

joe

joemm1961@yahoo.com

It'd have to be arousing watching your mom get aroused while watching a sex movie.

Now I have to find 'Pirates' to see how arousing it is.

4 stars