All Comments on 'Passion - A Long Time Coming'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved the story

I thought he was going to take her in the woods, I'm glad he waited till they got back to the house, so much more romantic. I wish a man would romance me like that all day, at least once in my life.

RubenesqueAphroditeRubenesqueAphroditeover 11 years ago
How do you do that?

Loved your story. Your words, the way you describe the foreplay took me to the edge with your companion, never quite falling completely over. Just balanced right there between ecstasy and anticipation, where a woman needs to be before making love. Beautiful account of what undoubtedly was a beautiful experience.

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