All Comments on 'Passionate Girl's Night'

This is what it is all about. A well paced story with that brings stunning visualizations

I think that you need to continue this story. I also think that maybe you should tell u more about your girlfriend who helped convinve you to put your stories here. Does she write, maybe you could work on a story together.

Really nicely done----Made me feel very---Well, very erotic

And she did all that without having anyone touch the others rectum---

Well done--More please

I love it even though it is pictureless it makes it seem like your right there watching the action. Keep up the great work I loved it!!!

The best erotik-storie i'v ever read-without a doubt the best-i give it 5 star's !!!-a-must-for those who like incest ! and girl on girl action !--the auther should definently keep writing !

this was hot and sweet, and i wish you'd write some more!

You must be joking, you call that writing an erotic story, where I am, you and your story would not make it past the kinder garden grade, it just plain sucks just like you do, but there is still hope for you, after all what can you expect from a Canadian especially when they are from British Columbia (barf, barf, and barf) get the message? You Canadians suck no mater where your from but especially the once from Bristish Columbia.

For the British Coloumbian Canadian bashing asshole: You should be ashamed of yourself, you dickless piece of dog-dirt! You set such a wonderful example. No wonder the term "Ugly American" are alive and well, with inconsiderate ignorant asshiols such as yourself around. Wish I could vote a ten for this story!

dont lsiten to those that say it was bad, it was excellent, i loved it, i would love to read more about them

I loved this story. Very vivid and fun to read. I hope you plan on writing more!

I appreciate that you took the time to write in such slow, erotic detail. Very, very sexy story!

Good story - I loved it - but now my wife will be wanting to know what caused the bucket load of pre-cum in my underpants!! "Ahh it was just an erotic story about two sisters finger-fucking each other for the first time...."

....."Yeah, right!"

Keep doing what you do well!

But very intense. I liked it. TBC

This was well written. It would be great to read a sequel.