All Comments on 'Passionate Performance'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
get an editor!

Obviously the writer is unfamiliar with English grammar and usage. He should get assistance and correct his stories before he publishes them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
:)

Loved this story. I wish it could have gone on a little longer and told a little about what happened after. But over all an awesome story.

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