All Comments on 'Past, Present and Future Ch. 02'

Excellent, well written, erotic!

All through reading both chapters so far, I have had this awful feeling that something is lurking in the mind of the author which will throw our happy couple off track somewhere soon. I like happy endings. Somehow I worry about the Future part of this story. We have survived Past and Present with little angst, but what's ahead?

Pennies should be bright and shiny, not tarnished.

Lue

I am loving this story! Wow!

Superlative!

Awesome!

Very well done.

Very very sensual. Can not wait for more, but I have to. Please hurry. Five Stars.

This is the best erotic fiction I have ever read, and I've been a steady reader of the genre for well over fifty years. Superb!@

Another five stars, every one well deserved. The little hint of the next chapter was funny and hints at another great chapter.

Such evocative writing and an unusual concept. Keep having to check the category and thinking are we in a mild form of bdsm here. Just waiting for something to go wrong, hope they make it in the end. 5 stars

You are masterful with words, a talent that I am richly enjoying. I loved your "four-way bar brawl" comment; I can just see you tinkering with phrases, setting them aside and returning to add ideas, erasing one, adjusting another. Good fiction takes time, a lesson I need to apply to my own attempts. You make me wonder if you are a published author elsewhere, adopting an alias here so as to write these stories anonymously. Even your TarnishedPenny name is a clever play on words. I am finding this series very enjoyable. Thank you.

Brilliant as always

Very sexy, love the way their relationship is growing.

Such an amazing story, so incredibly told, I can feel the warmth of the fire and the desire in harts and souls. The feeling the story creates is sensual and erotic … with lingering unease about what if, why or why now, if it were me … I don’t want this to end soon … I want to experience all those feelings again and again … please …

Again, 10 out of 5

Thank you

Exquisite erotica… for savoring. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥