Past, Present and Future Ch. 04

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I felt his fingers in my hair, his chest rise and fall with his breathing, soft lips on my shoulder.

I knew it now.

I was loved.

I don't think I've ever slept better.

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For those who enjoyed Stephanie's tale so far, a sample of Chapter 5:

"So, many happy returns, Tony. I hope you're enjoying yourself."

"Oh, yes," he said. "Oh very yes! Your being here is a very nice birthday present, Stephanie."

I'd thought about this. Thought about it a lot.

I looked at the bare form of Marcy in front of me, watched her bite her lower lip in concentration as her paintbrush moved between paintbox and paper. Tony's eyes followed mine.

"About that," I said gently. "I'd thought of something else."

I put my hand on his arm, squeezed tenderly.

"How about a hall pass?" I whispered.

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cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

OMG. Marcy as a gift....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The word that came to mind more than once while reading this was "lyrical" -- not only in how Stephanie describes the various forms of joy that she is experiencing, but also in how deftly, lightly, and gracefully you tell her / their story. Very nicely written!

Ravey19Ravey19almost 3 years ago

Still rolling along magnificently. Great writing and love the eroticism throughout. Please don't delay with the next chapter(s). 5 from me again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Inhaled all four chapters over two days. Can hardly wait for next. Soon? Please?

Thors_FistThors_Fistalmost 3 years ago

Another magnificent chapter, as good as the rest. Loving the little teases as to the next.

Mike9947Mike9947almost 3 years ago

In my view, very best literotica stories explore human relationships as expressed by our sexuality - I suppose it qualifies as porn - and most of lit is porn - but you are a great explorer of what may be our most important expression of being human. This lovely story requires a bit of suspension of disbelief - but that’s what stories do. In this, as I read it, you are exploring coming of age, May-September, the importance of a romantic and erotic stage - the cooking and eating, music, being in nature - and the importance of giving (as opposed to taking) as you have developed your characters. Well edited, well constructed, erotic scenes are brilliant - it is absolutely brilliant!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Nicely done.

pcman1950pcman1950almost 3 years ago

You create such enveloping, erotically charged and hypnotic dream states, shimmering like heat waves over mid-summer fields. The sex scenes hone in on the thrill & passion, not on the calisthenics & capitalized exclamations of ecstasy. I, too, hope that the primary story continues to be the love between Stephanie & Tony, though I'll be happy to follow where the muse leads you. And I'm going to surmise you're a fellow Canuck, not so much for the mention of Dundas but the quality of language.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Outstanding

Love the writing style and the story. So so enjoy reading this and look forward to many many more chapters.

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