All Comments on 'Past, Present and Future Ch. 05'

by TarnishedPenny

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 3 years ago

Another interesting chapter!

5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
The Best

Another outstanding and entertaining chapter. So so love the writing and story telling. More,,,,,,,please!

pcman1950pcman1950almost 3 years ago

Though thy penny be tarnished,

Thy prose high praise garnished.

tangledweedtangledweedalmost 3 years ago

I am loving this series, even though the rich older man giving the inexperienced young girl love lessons wouldn't normally be high on my reading list. It's the perfect balance between the partners, where the seemingly submissive one is more in control than it first appears. Watching her grow and gain confidence is an addictive kick.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowalmost 3 years ago

I always love a new chapter to this story... thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Like Oliver Twist, bowl in hand.

Please? Some more?

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiteralmost 3 years ago

Can he still be Perfect Tony and fuck the shit out of all her cute little coed friends? I guess not, huh?

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

I'm happy to find that there is at least another chapter . This is my first of your works . It did not disappoint . Very well written . Thank you .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The story is excellent but for the sake of the readers please write some to finish the series.

TarnishedPennyTarnishedPennyover 2 years agoAuthor

Working on it, folks. Thanks for the support.

Qwer12Qwer12over 2 years ago
More Of This Story

I so love the storyline, characters and storytelling of this adventure. We are so so ready for more. Please release Chapter 6 and then many many more for this story. Great Entertainment. Cheers

Alf62Alf62over 2 years ago

Truly engrossed in the story. Can’t wait for Chapter 6.

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601almost 2 years ago

Loving this, but the constant recaps are redundant. Who begins a story on chapter 5? It’s a series - just pick up where you left off and screw anybody stupid enough to begin a story in the middle.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Although not necessary for me, I don't mind the recaps at all. Seems that as her perspective on their relationship changes, I'm looking for changes in her view on their history, whether it's there or not...

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