All Comments on 'Patrick's Personal Card Ch. 04'

Just a an amazing story. Just like the rest of your series. I hope the series continues soon. Can't wait for more of their love story. 😁

So happy to find this today. Been needing my "Patrick & Peter & Michael" fix.

Great job as usual, Tim. Keep the story...and the lovers...coming.

Another triumph...another home run...another perfect piece! It would be so awesome to have that deep absolute love with another...perhaps in another life! Thank you for this ongoing tale...hopefully more! I agree with the previous and could use another "fix." I always look for the next one...my only complaint...if that is what you would call it...is to make the chapters longer!

Great story. You can tell That Patrick and Peter really love eachother by the way you wrote the story.

I've continued to enjoy the story. Now that confessions and talk of logistics are out of the way, I hope we can get to the good stuff ;) lol and I hope that Michael will have luck with the treatments. I'd love to see their bond continue to grow as they deal with that too. Hopefully you have more of the story to tell.

I thought the first two chapters in this series were amazing but as the story progressed the interactions between the two lovers just became unbearably ridiculous. Like really, would anyone actually say things like this? The setup for this series was great but the romance is a little to mushy it's almost a joke.

Such a sweet family. I love them!

A whirlwind romance! Less than a week, really? They're so sweet together, and Michael is adorable. More story, please!

My comment is about the Anonymous comment that says that your dialogue between the two men is "unbearably ridiculous". I strongly disagree. When two persons are deeply in love, extravagant language is the only way to truly express their feelings. Two strong silent male characters would never communicate with the reader, and expression of love purely through sex would turn humans into animals. Only extravagant language can express deep emotion.

I love this story! Thank you!🥰🥰🥰