All Comments on 'Patti Finally Sated'

Lucky girl!!

Good plot, stilted telling.

Lukas

I noticed that the banter wasn't quite as smooth in this one. Still, it is enjoyable. Maybe sometimes technique can get in the way. But to strive for economy in language is a good thing, though.

Was hoping for more details from their escapades.

Gotta love a dirty 'old' man and a willing young lady! Another well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.