by siliconejelly
I mean the dialog was pretty bad and no storyline BUT it still was HAWT
This was a nice development for the start of a story and that's were it stops. Were is the main story? What did she do with her new transformed monster tits and cow nipples? What about her desired transformation of her pussy and clit; her wish for a huge camel toe and giant clit with monster hanging labials. This build-up demanded a finished story or a chapter 2 written before the initial release of chapter one and both released at the same time.
unless the only thing you find hot are entirely undeveloped characters
How is siliconejelly's writing like his cock?
It's usually shitty, but at least it's short
I was laughing my ass off at the thought that anyone would think this is sexy. ridiculously stupid story.
Love this story! Would love to see her get fucked by a real sick and titfucked!
This is so well written. I need to know what happened next!