All Comments on 'Patti's European Adventure'
by HawkeyePierce
- 14 Comments
Anonymousabout 10 years agoPlease as least refer to the husbands who are home working hard.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoNo conscience? No guilt? Just outright betrayal that they intend to live with for the rest of their lives? Totally selfish really.
Hopefully they'll get caught so their husbands can get away from them quick-before any kids arrive
Anonymousabout 10 years agoJust bad. Horrible. Forget plot and character development, this was shut writing.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThe fundamental starting point of a 'Loving Wives' tale is that the woman is married. This story reads like the exciting adventure of a college coed. The husband for all intents and purposes doesn't exist.
It certainly doesn't seem remotely realistic that a woman who is painted as very conservative and happily married would end up having sex in the middle of an airplane cabin hours after leaving home and have NO GUILT feelings at all.
But more than the lack of realism that suggests... the opportunity for an interesting story is pretty much thrown out the window if the wife doesn't think she is married. Where is the emotional tension? Where is the angst and conflict and internal debate about what she should do? Eliminating all of that seems like it removes all potential for the story to be particularly compelling.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoHow does a supposedly conservative woman just suddenly go bat shit crazy? WAY too many holes in this mess to be even considered a story, let alone a good story. Just plain awful.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoMore brain dead sluts and their whoring around while husbands and kids are home. Fuck you little man!
Lickideesplitabout 10 years agoIt is too early in the 'cheating' timeline to determine if there will eventually be marital consequences. The airline ad campaign seems to be focussed on Europe, but Sweeties certainly compromised their adventuresomeness BEFORE boarding the 747. There will be lots of opportunities for both Hubbies to get a 'heads up!' If nothing more, Sweeties' apparel will be a shocker if Hubbies get access to the promo photos!
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThere are no husbands or kids or morals or wedding vows or love, just dogs fucking in the back yard, if this is your idea of marriage and family, you live alone. Non erotic,-5!
Anonymousabout 10 years agoPeople bitch too much I real enjoyed what you wrote and look forward to more of this story if you are willing to write it. I gave 5 stars by the way
Anonymousover 8 years agoAnd realized the story was over before it started... the teachers never returned and nobody missed them
Just_Wordsover 4 years agoThey left fully intending to cheat. They had no conscience about what they were doing. They don't deserve loving husbands. They are just common married tramps.
