All Comments on 'Paula'

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PyroPyroover 18 years ago
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I would have liked a little more of her feelings/sensations of what was happening. You've told me what HE was seeing/feeling/experiencing, but you didn't show me what she was going through; the turbulent sensations she must have been feeling, the doubt, the desire, the need, the release.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow

short but very nice story babe

lots of huggggggs for it

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