All Comments on 'Paul's Sister is a Tease'

Great story, I was with you every second. Thanks for the memories.

Not too bad. Just curious, why did you feel the need to capitalize the first letter of 'sister', 'brother' and 'mother'? I found it annoying. Thank you.

When to capitalize sister, brother etc? I think that it's correct when your are referring to them directly.

"What time is it Mother?"

But other times it is lower case.

His mother is an attractive woman.

I find it difficult to always be correct so I've taken the easy option of always making it upper case.

Hm idk. Big build up for a small finish

Me like it me like it

Not bad, but it could have been better. Paul's arrogance over his IQ put me off. 😒 I didn't care whether he succeeded in getting his sister to give it up or not. I kind of wish that she had shot him down. 3/5