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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltalmost 4 years agoAuthor

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abiostudent3abiostudent3almost 4 years ago

Well. This is certainly different.

I have to say, it's kinda been fun watching your sci-fi maniac characters evolve from Delta-V to All the King's Horses to this.

Looking forward to seeing where it goes - I just wish there was more available already! (Or that I could subscribe to your patreon.)

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltalmost 4 years agoAuthor

@Willy300: It's an artificial moon - that's why it's described as having spokes!

ecrevelleecrevellealmost 4 years ago

This was a really fun read! I'm excited to see what kind of mischief Lou gets up to with his fancy new bespoke equipment. And what's with this android boning his pops??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

If I did not love your stories so much I would really worry about you. But enough sentimentality, post another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please don't change tense in the middle

I like your other work but the tense changes in the middle of the chapter at word places are jarring.

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltalmost 4 years agoAuthor

It should all be past tense, but I'm sorry if I made any typos!

KJay15KJay15almost 3 years ago

Yeah not into he she things

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Well, you can go straight to hell then, Kjay! Enjoy the trip.

TomdullyTomdullyover 1 year ago

Commununist oops sorry a Democrats dont make good Si-Fi authors

TomdullyTomdullyover 1 year ago

I'm sorry I must be in the wrong party ?because freedom of speech is considered hate speech now days

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 1 year agoAuthor

Man, i wish democrats were communists, that would be tight.

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