All Comments on 'Pay It Forward'

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csltcsltover 3 years ago
That Was Fun!

5 stars!

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430over 3 years ago
My Comments

Good story. Hope it continues. Thanks.

TeenStudforOlderWomenTeenStudforOlderWomenover 3 years ago
Great Story

I loved this story. Hopefully, the mom will be showing up at places looking for other young men to satisfy her sexual needs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow wow. That would be beautiful. To fu k mom

Loved the lArg Free he pumped her pussy full his girl friend. We t down on her and sucked his. I'm out of her. Picked her clean

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

Can’t wait for the sister!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
NOT "small, but perky" {boobs}!

That sounds like she is apologising for her little tits.

That line SHOULD READ: small AND perky.

B cups are perfect, as are As or Cs.

Most women will orgasm with PROPER attention to her chest, especially when they are small{ish}, and perky, and beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Shaved pussy is just terrible!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Well written but greatly lacks realism and progresses too fast for an incest story: The young couple are only 21 and 19, and Cassie has already "shared him" with multiple women? Cassie and Chris' relationship doesn't feel like that of a mother and daughter in law, it's too intimate, too fast. And, Chris is convinced far too easily for how shy she acts - realistically, someone like her would need far more coercion to ever agree to this. The "pay it forward" bit at the end is also entirely tacked on and has no relation to anything else in the story, just appearing in the very last paragraphs to make way for a sequel. It's a very sexy story line, but could have been executed better and with more realism.

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