All Comments on 'Pay It Forward Ch. 03'

This story is fantastic. I really like the way you are writing this tale. I know his sister will be OK. She has to be. These boys have really bonded and they need each other's strength. Great job I read to relax. Waiting for the next chapter. 5 stars

after reading your stories they just get better and better.

your turning into a delight to read. with each chapter getting more bold . holding back on the sex adding a brilliant story line that has its readers want to read even more. i look forward to ever new chapter with such interest.

like that book you fine that you can't put down till the last page is read.

that what your stories are becoming . keep writing you have a flair . love the words they just flow .

EXCELLENT CHAPTER hope that Clemmie will be ok can not wait to read more

Moving to the next chapter right now...........

I'm glad I gave it a chance. I must confess that I overlooked it since it wasn't a romance let alone no sex. I'm terrible, I know. I'm enjoying this story a lot.