All Comments on 'Pay It Forward Ch. 04'

excellent work a really good story can not wait to read more

Oh my goodness, I cried through the while chapter. Darren took a chance with Sharon lets hope Clemmie give Michael one. She know the McGregors are down to earth people so it is s slap in their faces for her to think she isn't good enough.

Yes I said Problem........I don't want to stop and leave a comment. The story is so good that I just want to go to the next chapter. I do like the fact that rather than paying back a debt you should instead pay it forward......can't wait to see what happens next....

LOVE IT!