All Comments on 'Payback'

Nobody could ask for more then that. Thank You. Ronnie W.

and erotic, I'm impressed with your talent.

Good story. Thank you

Gret job! This is a well written highly vivid story sure to excite!

And a good morning to you too.

Boyd

it is a fun, exciting, and erotic description of two lovers playing with each other.

Hi, so I copied this on wattpad, gave you all the credit. If that wasn't ok please let me know and I will take it down instantly. You can find me on wattpad by the username @ForgottenCharm

Nice premise.

But too rushed. Everything happens so fast, why? What's the rush? Why no extended, slow teasing of his cock with at least her hands AND her mouth? And maybe a titty fuck too with her mouth capturing his cock on his 'in' stroke, and all of it designed to delay his cumming too soon.

Three stars.