All Comments on 'Payback is a Bitch'

I love how you wrote this story!

The slow tempo you take in describing the events well matches the slow change in the lead character's feelings towards Julie. I enjoyed your vivid descriptions of Sandy's inner emotions, and the turmoil she felt.

I am looking forward to reading your other stories!

Great story. I love the slow build up without the story dragging.

Made me cum

loved the experience of reading your piece......i bet you like everyother girl i know must have imagined taking on your bestfriend, sexually. truly inspired work.

Enjoyed it very much. Thanks.

Certainly better than my own offerings

One of the best

I would never have guessed this was by a male author. Very hot, and very believably feminine POV. Wow. Double wow.

Well Done. Hot Story.