All Comments on 'Payback Pt. 02'

Yet again, cheating whore gets paid for her betrayal. This guy has friends bad enough to intimidate outlaw bikers but she gets a payday and has to move? No revenge at all on the one person who caused all this. Ridiculous.

Over the top.

I feel bad for he Bikes.

He wasn't a former navy seal?

Cinco Estrellas!

she got off light

Her payback was negligible. She should have gone to jail and received $0 in the divorce. Oh well!

You wrote Pam as too stupid. Othwise a mildly entertaining tale.

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3 ***

This was a good story and I give it five stars. We never really hear why Pam started cheating on Charlie with the biker guy but I presumed that she got bored of being married to an accountant and longed for the exciting life of a biker babe. Charlie dodged a bullet by getting rid of this bitch. He had a good plan and had good friends backing him up. This story ended nicely. Good job!!!!

What an excellent five star piece of entertainment. Great job on painting a perfect mental picture of the characters and the situations.