All Comments on 'Paying for College'

5 stars few typos but overall excellent set up.

I hope you continue Mandy's adventures :) Thanks for writing and best of luck in your entry to National Nude Day Contest.

5 star from me

Great writing enjoyed the story and plot

Hope we get to read more of her adventures

Best of Luck for Nude Day 2020 contest..

I am sorry, but I felt a little more proof reading would have improved the flow. The disjoints became annoying, considering the quantity and detracted from the sense of the story line.

While this is for a contest I do hope we can follow Mandy on learning her new job.

We need more!

Encore! Please add on all of the way to Mandy's graduation.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story and plot. We need a part 2!

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This was a great story that I hope you will continue. You were able to make this reader wanting more. Thank you

Great story but needs to finish up little more but great

Would love to follow her through the college years. Definitely write more stories.

Very Fine !

To much errors for a Five Star and not really a Nude Day Contest-story either.

But I want more, and that even if I'm not the usual BDSM/Control type of reader.

I see it as a good start for a series of stories. Just don't stroll to much out to the extreme though.

And let someone proof read, please.

A good read packed with detail but does require a careful reading to correct minor mistakes. Other than that it's well written and begs a sequel or two as she works through the years and succeeds as he intends.

Very well done and the incrimental exposure and humiliation was carefully built up. I would love a sequel to highlight the Christmas party or eventual graduation of the senior girl.

I can't believe you stopped here. I want to read more about Mandy's adventures. Would love to have had a job like that when I was in college. There were a few places where you hit the enter key in the middle of a sentence. Otherwise... Great job.

The ATM ruined it.

This made a beautiful introduction to what could become a great novel.

I only wish that you gave us more. Great Job

Thought it was great. Wish there was more