All Comments on 'Paying the Price'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just another CONTROL FREAK tale

Sure to be loved by other control freaks

Ton8tyTon8tyover 16 years ago
Very Nicely Done

This vanilla, hetero male thought that you did an excellent job of relating a believable tale of RACK. Your characters were well developed and believable, your prose and usage very professional and the pace of the story was exactly right. I, for one, would like to see more of your talented writing.

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