All Comments on 'Payment for Services Rendered'

even though it was fairly short. Write many more with similar basic story lines. Some of us are tired of the fact that so many who wrote stories like this got ran off by the boo-birds. Anyway, thanks for the story.

I always enjoy reading your stories. Thank you for keeping us so happily entertained.

but nothing really special in word-smithing or plotting.

I have read almost exactly the same plot elsewhere on this site.

this is the way for it to be done. Sounds like they were all happy with the payment plan. Was this a variation of "Lay" away?

A good story, fast moving and it read well, thanks

Not special enough for 5 stars. Perhaps 4 stars is a fair rating.

You need someone to check your work. Someone who knows the difference between plural and possessive, who also knows grammar and can spell.

at least she is honest to herself

5* and a big laugh from me!

As.a fan of JPB, I've read a lot worse from him.

A cuck story is a cuck story, even if the MC is the one doing the cucking instead of being cucked.

A win win. Enjoyed it.

A good deal is when all leave happy!

Barter at its finest. Everyone got something out of the deal.

Thanks Bob

No wonder she’s heavy, she needs a ride to go 3 fucking blocks to work.