All Comments on 'Pearl'

Very well written, and a fully realized original setting. Great!

Awesome

What a cool concept! Well written and sexy.

Hope you keep writing more. The idea is awesome and its well written. But your characters s-stutter too much :) I get you're trying to portray nervousness, but it'd be more effective in smaller doses.

Could you please write a sequel?

Really good, totally original and is begging for a follow up chapter! Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️

Have returned to this story many times, excellent work. I hope you'll continue to write more in this world or style!