All Comments on 'Pee Where You Sit Ep. 01'

That was super hot! Thank you for sharing this story with us. Looking forward to seeing more of your work! :]

Loved it!

I want to be on that bus

I want to be (pee?) on that bus too! I wish we had that technology here. That would make an awesome lounge/kitchen/anywhere chair...

~T.

hey i liked it but what would have made it better is if u had it co-ed sex and brother and sister sat together and bro had to help sis because she is disabled where her legs do not work but this was beautiful

This is my go-to story for when I want some "literary assistance" when I "make Jesus cry" (haha it's like an anti-euphemism for "masturbation". I really really like that you set up an elaborate backstory with the cleaner to offset any implications of "vandalizing" stuff (I don't get off on wetting stuff, but I really like seeing others do it, but that "I'm making some janitor clean my mess for low-wages" guilt feeling is really strong. You managed to avoid that entirely! It also didn't go so crazy into "and now we all have pee-sex together with our coach!" that you were overwhelmed by the author trying to cram everything into one story. The harmlessness and them being (fairly nonsexual) to each other makes it seem much more realistic. Write more!