by RedHatter76
And while there may be one or two other crazies out there, this was just over-the-top ugly.
Silly naysayer, I thought this was great! Please keep it up, I've loved all of your stories so far! :]
It doesnt bother me that there's breastfeeding mixed into these stories ^^ and dont listen to that one person, the story hardly talked about video games anyway, so theres not much grounds to base their comment off of. At least to me.
Mixing both fetishes is a good idea, as i happen to be into both of them. Mixing them into the same story is ok with me. Maybe adding a little more detail to the peeing bits, and your story's would be 5stars!
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Fire2ninja
Too lazy to make a account
Peeing is the thing, anything else is incidental but tolerable.
I know I may be a bit late but I didn't think I'd be into the breastfeeding side of it but I actually really enjoyed it as well, I say you should keep it up
with the introduction of breast milk fetish i was a little put off - i think focusing on pee is more erotic
I like having them both in there but keep them separate like you did this time, or write two versions, one that includes it and one that doesn't